poemranker ::WAIT UNTIL THE END by celticskatermatt1

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WAIT UNTIL THE END

by celticskatermatt1

Member since 2004 · Posted 3 Feb 2005 · 6 comments

I felt my body break as i fell to the ground It cracked and broke with a snap of air my head almost weightless hit with a smack Good bye world i will never see you again The air was cold as i began to shut my eyes Only to feel my soul die and never live again.

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6 comments

[10] deleted user 7-Feb-05/6:21 PM Reply
this is pretty good
[10] deleted user 7-Feb-05/6:22 PM Reply
this is pretty good
[10] deleted user 7-Feb-05/6:22 PM Reply
this is pretty good
[n/a] deleted user 19-Jun-05/5:16 PM Reply
This is pretty shitty
[n/a] deleted user 19-Jun-05/5:17 PM Reply
This is pretty shitty
[n/a] deleted user 19-Jun-05/5:17 PM Reply
This is pretty shitty.

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