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An intolerable rash brother

Member since 2002 · Posted 6 Feb 2005 · 3 comments

Jesus, I'll tell yah, uninspiration is my cortisone crush then I weeped him a river, he said, hush, baby, hush It's unbecoming of your sort to fumble through the hollows Mush the mash in the pot princess, and we'll teach you to swallow See, I've been waiting for a sort of depressed type of wolfboy to use as a diaper, or bohemian chew toy shame that you spit on the soul of that satan a female no less, who brought home the bacon

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[7] Mister Cakes 7-Feb-05/3:46 PM Reply
great
[n/a] Crakyamuni › Mister Cakes 8-Feb-05/11:59 AM Reply

Thanks for voting.
[8] Dovina 11-Feb-05/11:50 AM Reply
Do you mean "Cortizone" the drug, which I might have misspelled?
weeped should be "wept" in this context I think.
The soul of satin, a female, who brought home the bacon causes wonderment on whether this is about Jesus, God, or your real brother. "We'll teach you to swallow" is good.