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The Sky Is My Nation

by fetisha

Member since 2005 · Posted 27 Feb 2005 · 1 comment

The sky is my nation No war operations Or dollar quotations In the Country I live Constellations of sisters The clouds are my room The planets my brothers My mother the Moon The heavenly lair Of misteries afar An ocean so fair Suspended on stars And there are no gates To this infinite house Patriotic I am To a land with no laws Come enter my homeland Catch a comet, fly high Free from earthly pain May your nation be the Sky.

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[10] zodiac 28-Feb-05/10:12 PM Reply
Q1: What about wars that actually take place mostly in the sky? Like, say, the last ten.

Q2: What is involved in being patriotic to a nation with no laws? I wouldn't have thought it possible.