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Death is a Three Step Process

Member since 2004 · Posted 6 Mar 2005 · Edited 24 Jan 2006 · 6 comments

silence adds despair (nobody ever sees silence) does everyone's pain receive enough solitude - (sorry, I'm obviously nothing) see - understanding is crucial (I've done enough)

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[n/a] richa 7-Mar-05/2:46 PM Reply

Sudden Death Syndrome. Don't get the rest of it though.

[n/a] dancin_n_da_moonlite › richa 7-Mar-05/3:47 PM Reply

i am afraid you have misunderstood

my acrostic includes all the words not just the first of each line

[n/a] richa 7-Mar-05/3:52 PM Reply

sad
noess
depres
sion
suic
ide. Got ya. Probably a bit ambitious to do an acrostic in this manner and have it make sense.

[9] Dan garcia-Black 16-Mar-05/8:19 AM Reply

Good work on an easy form made difficult (and better}.

[8] deleted user 13-Apr-05/7:47 PM Reply

Ah, such a downer poem. I wish it were longer, but the form is good. I wish I could make acrostics that were clever...

[n/a] god'swife 26-Jan-06/6:51 PM Reply

I like the title.