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bleeding

by crooked_smile

Member since 2005 · Posted 9 Mar 2005 · 6 comments

my lips are cracked my soul is bleeding with every heart beat more invisible blood is spilling onto the kitchen floor my throat is cracked my tounge is bleeding with every word I utter more invisible blood is spilling onto the kitchen floor my brain is cracked my heart is bleeding with every second more invisible blood is spilling onto the kitchen floor

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6 comments

[10] frdup717 9-Mar-05/5:33 PM Reply
cheerful (10)


(on a happire note my poem ALONE was published!!!!!!!yay!!!!!!!!0
[n/a] crooked_smile › frdup717 9-Mar-05/6:40 PM Reply
hmm thats nice.......though frankly i have know idea who you are, if you ever get a book let me know and i will check it out

-lia
[8] zodiac › frdup717 11-Mar-05/9:55 PM Reply
In a poetry.com anthology?
[n/a] crooked_smile › zodiac 12-Mar-05/5:14 PM Reply
that wouldnt be much to brag about -
lia
[n/a] edpeterson 12-Mar-05/10:03 AM Reply
frightful

[n/a] crooked_smile › edpeterson 12-Mar-05/5:15 PM Reply
why thankyou