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Evening

Member since 2004 · Posted 10 Mar 2005 · 2 comments

In life's catastrophe It is important to step lightly and question nightly

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[5] Dovina 10-Mar-05/11:59 AM Reply
"life's" seems unneeded, and "nightly" seems not often enough for most catastrophes.
[8] cheese.doodles 30-Apr-07/3:13 PM Reply
It's cute! I like.