Sleeping Beauty

Member since 2004 · Posted 14 Mar 2005 · 3 comments

The sorry sleeping daughter whose white pricked finger wore a single rosy bead felt her heart wake one Monday afternoon. The patient purposed prince whose kin did not believe in fairystories read in her repose enchantment.

Rate it

0 is the worst, 10 the best. Pick a number, add a comment if you like, then send it. Keys: 0–9 pick, Enter sends.

mean 7.25 weighted 5.27 rank 3919 views 186 View voting details →

4 votes so far. Yours would make 5.4 votes so far

3 comments

[9] richa 16-Mar-05/3:12 AM Reply

Cute. Except that two lines seem to have inexplicably become detached from both the first and second verses of this two verse poem.

[n/a] fevriere › richa 17-Mar-05/2:35 AM Reply

Does the waking up not deserve a big break? I see what you mean, sadly.

[8] Jill Stockinger 28-Dec-20/2:16 PM Reply

Enjoyed this!