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WHY DAD?WHY?

Member since 2004 · Posted 18 Mar 2005 · 3 comments

I don't know why i try. I want you to be there for me. You never are as much as i want you to. You act as if i'm not a part of your life! I can't believe i cried for you! Of all people it was you! Why dad?! Why?! That is my question. The question you never answer. All the things you gave me mean nothing to me now! I want to take them all and throw them away! In your eyes you might not see this way-but i do. This is how i feel. Why dad? Why?

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[2] thepinkbunnyofdoom 19-Mar-05/7:44 PM Reply

I'm normally all about the emotional poems, but honestly? If this was pimple I might have cut you enough slack to give this a 5. As is, a 2. All you've done is bitch at someone whom I seriously doubt will read this. The rest of us, don't need to see this.

[10] zodiac 20-Mar-05/2:47 AM Reply

You should travel back in time 15 years and start a grunge band.

[1] cheese.doodles 15-Mar-07/10:23 AM Reply

I'm sorry about your dad and all, but the poem isn't that good.