pihsdneirf ruo fo dne eht(The Burn)

Member since 2003 · Posted 19 Mar 2005 · 12 comments

You've disregarded everything That I ever said and burned me And I used to think that we were friends Apparently all I am to you is... Worse than what you've ever been Am I so easily forgotten Do those drunken nights mean anything Or was I merely, just a distraction I used to lie on your bed Watching movies and just talking Wrapped in the comfort of you And occasionally we'd break into old games That we've both been known to play I guess this time you got me So as I crash, healing from this burn Thinking to myself... You never learn You've inspired something in me More than just a spark of envy A borderline frenzy, that just might crack The walls I've built to house my hatred Are you ready to dance with the devil's son You've tasted my pain You've tasted my passion Are you ready to taste my fury You thought I was kidding When I said this hurt me Well now I have to laugh in your face Next time you call me your friend A smile will cross my lips And I will have to call you a liar I'd do anything for a friend In case you can't tell I'm done being that to you

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[7] juliharrelson 19-Mar-05/7:10 PM Reply

I can tell you are a pretty intelligent person, maybe above average, and very articulate...I like this poem. I wrote one about being "burned" once....one of the phrases was

.....new skin under the burns......

This poem brought it to mind. That's all I can remember of my "burned" poem. I was pretty crazy over that guy. I've forgotten all about him now, oh...and the poem was thrown away with the memory. That's all I could retrieve from that dusty part of my memory.

Good stuff, pinkbunny-guy. I'll read some more of yours.

[7] juliharrelson 19-Mar-05/7:11 PM Reply

oooops. I forgot to vote

[n/a] thepinkbunnyofdoom › juliharrelson 19-Mar-05/7:36 PM Reply

lol, don't worry about that. Click the best Tab sometime.

[7] zodiac › thepinkbunnyofdoom 20-Mar-05/2:48 AM Reply

Christ your insouciant.

[n/a] thepinkbunnyofdoom › zodiac 20-Mar-05/10:15 AM Reply

Always, why shouldn't I be? I wrote the word "pus" and got six 10's for it. Because I'm good? No. Because someone thinks, that I'm a genius(silly girls and thinking). But its true none the less. How many crap poems of mine are in the top ten right now? Too many.

<3 Jason

[n/a] thepinkbunnyofdoom › thepinkbunnyofdoom 21-Mar-05/1:04 AM Reply

Who says we have to be serious all the time. I'm not so sure that life is at all a serious matter. I mean come on. What fun would that be?

<3 Jason

[7] zodiac 20-Mar-05/2:47 AM Reply

1) Are you on The O.C.?

2) Are you reading The Da Vinci Code?

[n/a] thepinkbunnyofdoom › zodiac 20-Mar-05/10:08 AM Reply

lol. No, Angels and Demons was a good read but tedious, to pick back up again(It took me a month to sit down and finish it), so I decided against The Da Vinci Code, despite Dan Brown's great crafting of factual fictions.

<3 Jason

[7] zodiac › thepinkbunnyofdoom 21-Mar-05/10:21 PM Reply

I think Dan Brown could have crafted The Da Vinci Code better if he'd shat on a single sheet of paper and folded it into a bad origami pterodactyl with his lips.

[n/a] thepinkbunnyofdoom › zodiac 22-Mar-05/1:30 AM Reply

Having never read the book, I'll have to agree, but add that the pterodactal, be lit from the beak, by a lighter, using his toes.

[0] burgerking33 21-Mar-05/3:05 PM Reply

hello this is the person who you commented on about eat what you want. first of all, this may be the worst poem i have ever read in my entire life. you should try wrestling instead. oh, and your name is gay. thanks! i gave you a 0. hahahahahaha

[n/a] thepinkbunnyofdoom › burgerking33 22-Mar-05/1:34 AM Reply

What a child. Grow the fuck up. Go to the local libary, and read a few big kid books. If the weastest insult possible, a hahaha, and your smoltering zero are the best you've got, give me a second, to hide in fear. Not.

<3 Jason