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A good little poem

by INTRANSIT

Member since 2002 · Posted 20 Mar 2005 · Edited 27 Mar 2005 · 7 comments

In a time when thoughts turn to Rye (bread) and infommercial possibilities One realizes some things might have worked, rye has always been rye, yet the pickle is as fresh and crisp as ever.

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[8] Dovina 21-Mar-05/6:46 AM Reply
Do you really need (bread) after "rye" and "possibilities" after infomercial. You did say it's a little poem. Thoughts turn rye is good. Why not infomercials piclke?
[n/a] INTRANSIT › Dovina 27-Mar-05/12:58 PM Reply
I think I do need bread. I'm not talkin'bout wheat, had to clarify. The possibilities might go. Got lots of new inspiration out here. Will rewrite and post as time permits.

TAKE CARE YA'LL!
[7] edpeterson 21-Mar-05/6:49 AM Reply
good to hear you won't be needing that viagra regimen afterall.
[n/a] INTRANSIT › edpeterson 27-Mar-05/12:51 PM Reply
I do hope that is not the only pickle playing in your mind.
Is it better with (yet)?
[2] durr_T_hip_E 22-Mar-05/11:46 AM Reply
I'm not sure what it is; unfortunately, the delusional worldly web in my mind simply doesn't like it. I like pickles so you got one point for that. And, I like rye bread, so you got another for that. But, all I see here is you telling me that when you think of bread and infomercials, you also think of pessimism and things that didn't work so that you may appreciate the fresh pickle in your mouth.

If you wanted me to picture some random guy eating a pickle on rye, then good job.

Peace,

Sean
[n/a] INTRANSIT › durr_T_hip_E 27-Mar-05/12:55 PM Reply
Ok my fellow wierdsconsinite, we're boxin'! If you're imagination fell that short, it's on you. E.P. got it. Well one angle anyway. Is it only pessimism? Are you sure. We'll have abrew whence I return.
[10] dancin_n_da_moonlite 30-Mar-05/2:39 PM Reply
i like this (though i dont eat pickles).......