poemranker ::Blur by thepinkbunnyofdoom

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Blur

Member since 2003 · Posted 22 Mar 2005 · 0 comments

I didn't ask for this life style But since for now, it is what its I'll be spinning dizzy Just to get things done I'm not saying I didn't see this coming Because if you look, you know I did You did it to yourself, you fell in love with me And I knew it was only going to end badly I'm sorry, if I'm busy Trying to rebuild my life So that I can be worth someones time But your right, I never let myself be fully captured I loved what you saw in me And I knew that under the banner of a different day When we had both stopped spinning dizzy Things would have gone better

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