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Free verse № 122301

Amsterdam One

Member since 2005 · Posted 23 Mar 2005 · 3 comments

bicycles bind everything we are everything - again - as the train station wanders away behind and back further away from this and that treading towards a bridge every bridge is a bicycle rack everyone walks here they carry backpacks full of the world friendliness finds a home in public parades of content cyclists riding across bridges and open borders worldly soldiers march trading prayers while skeletons fall secretly celebrating life as bicycles rust and die here

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[9] Dovina 24-Mar-05/8:18 AM Reply
I hope you're talking about the Rails-to-Trails project we have going in America, where abandoined railroad rights-of-way are being converted to bicycle trails. Revive the bicycle!
[10] zodiac 25-Mar-05/10:16 PM Reply
Really? I was under the impression only Americans carry backpacks anymore.
[8] dancin_n_da_moonlite 2-Apr-05/10:30 AM Reply
not my style but its sounds nice