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natural (Free verse) by the_poetess
what if your spirit was a glass of sparkling cider
and moon beams came out of your fingers and toes
and what if you were never cliche, never stale
always fresh as a daisy or daffodil
if only my heart was made out strawberries
not oranges
and if only childhood was a blueberry
and adulthood wasn't plain blue.
have you ever heard that one song, about Julia,
because I wish that I had a windy smile.
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Posted: March 27, 2005 5:53 PM PST; Last modified: March 27, 2005 5:54 PM PST
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