poemranker ::cacoon by whispern_smoke_wisp

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Free verse № 122807

cacoon

Member since 2005 · Posted 2 Apr 2005 · 4 comments

I feel like I should be wrapped in a white silk cacoon, for a year. Trapped by myself with nothing, but my mind and white silk, to entertain my thoughts. the pureness that surrounds me will become me easing all my evil thoughts away. And when I step out blinking into the warm afternoon light 365 days later, my large and delicate wings will carry me to the sun.

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4 comments

[7] thepinkbunnyofdoom 2-Apr-05/11:31 PM Reply
You have potential. -7-
[8] zodiac › thepinkbunnyofdoom 3-Apr-05/3:58 AM Reply
She misspelled cocoon.
[7] thepinkbunnyofdoom › zodiac 3-Apr-05/10:59 AM Reply
Even so, look at the other My_Name_Looks_Like_This writers. This at least has one image with meaning i.e. white silk/purity. How many others of the 15 year old My_Name_Looks_Like_This writers even come close to writing something that isn't a pimple marked free verse?

<3 Jason
[n/a] whispern_smoke_wisp › thepinkbunnyofdoom 3-Apr-05/12:25 PM Reply
thankyou