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Sudden Change

by Dovina

Member since 2004 · Posted 20 Apr 2005 · 6 comments

Hit by a hard blow of brilliant light Paul fell from his horse Blinded and shocked Until understanding came Hit by a soft blow of undeserved friendship I fell from a high horse Befuddled and shocked To be led by the hand Until understanding comes

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[9] INTRANSIT 20-Apr-05/7:21 AM Reply
Paul, of Le Bible, No? Been to Dallas. Then Houston. Now Amarillo, going to Seattle. Phew! i'm beat.
[n/a] Dovina › INTRANSIT 20-Apr-05/7:52 AM Reply
Get some rest, or head for Damascus, get a load of Christians, haul them to Rome, or well, try to.
[9] Caducus 20-Apr-05/8:30 AM Reply
Weird how the opening line seemed long but was ironed out by fiorst line of second stanza. The last line is sheer brilliance hope they interpret it as i did (wrong or not).
[n/a] Dovina › Caducus 21-Apr-05/1:57 PM Reply
There is no "wrong."
[n/a] zodiac › Dovina 22-Apr-05/4:57 AM Reply
Yes there is. For instance (and this is not my, zodiac's, interpretation): This is a story about Paul Reiser being blown by Helen Hunt during an especially drunken 'Mad About You' filming and going blind.
[10] Bankrupt_Word_Clerk 14-Jun-05/1:00 AM Reply
Fine