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Couplet

by fevriere

Member since 2004 · Posted 20 Apr 2005 · 2 comments

This will be wasted time, while she blesses The name that, soon, the same mouth confesses.

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[10] zodiac 22-Apr-05/1:41 PM Reply
The commas around soon are unnecessary. Is it really more wasted time than other ways of passing time? That's The Eagles' philosophy, and look where it got them.
[n/a] fevriere › zodiac 24-Apr-05/3:22 PM Reply
Exactly my point. ;D I don't suppose it's ever a waste to bless something, but it's a waste to praise the unpraiseworthy. Does that mean my poem's just a nice pair of lines and not really a poem at all.