poemranker ::Ode to Billy Mac by windyone

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Ode № 123934

Ode to Billy Mac

by windyone

Member since 2005 · Posted 22 Apr 2005 · 3 comments

Sometimes the nights seem so long you think of life and things gone wrong with tender thoughts and love to share you find your friend someone who cares and when his journey leads him on you're glad he came and sang his song

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[n/a] windyone 22-Apr-05/12:24 PM Reply
written to a friend who passed like a breath of fresh air through my life at a very difficult period
[8] zodiac › windyone 22-Apr-05/1:16 PM Reply
Try not to post explanatory comments on your poems.
[8] zodiac 22-Apr-05/1:34 PM Reply
There's nothing really wrong with this poem except that it should be properly punctuated and doesn't really have anything distinguishing it. Original or striking poems about friends are hard to write. And there are far too many friend-poems on poemranker. If you're bent on doing it, though, here's an interesting place to start:

http://www.slate.com/id/2092680

Or here:

http://www.slate.com/id/3416, http://www.slate.com/id/33215, http://www.slate.com/id/2089046