poemranker ::Sailor Dress by sunset sky

DetailsThe poem, its numbers, and the conversation.

Free verse № 124125

Sailor Dress

Member since 2005 · Posted 27 Apr 2005 · 2 comments

My mother hid the cross in a small triangular box covered in mirrors I saw her retrieve it one day as the late afternoon shadows skimmed warmly across her hair I was only five My father was the man who shook the table Oil wells and such I needed a passage I escaped that summer in my sailor dress Down to the water praying "good girl" baptised in the ditch I don't know when He discovered it was gone I returned before dinner Satan punished me that night with a belt.

Rate it

0 is the worst, 10 the best. Pick a number, add a comment if you like, then send it. Keys: 0–9 pick, Enter sends.

mean 7.33 weighted 5.63 rank 2198 views 143 View voting details →

6 votes so far. Yours would make 7.6 votes so far

2 comments

[9] Dovina 27-Apr-05/7:01 AM Reply
Well told story. Why did she do it? - that's the lingering question.

Welcome to poemranker.
[9] ChaseValentine 27-Apr-05/3:25 PM Reply
Yes.