poemranker ::Blurry, All in a Flurry by darylchew

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Blurry, All in a Flurry

Member since 2004 · Posted 3 May 2005 · Edited 15 May 2005 · 0 comments

Resonate, levitate. Hang between these walls of regret and disappointment like sound so tame - Am I a shame? To quit this game and leave no one to pick up the pieces of a shattered hope. Satiate, exonerate. Satisfy this hunger of self-denial by striking myself off the list of the sinned - don't I get the gist? That everything started out cold. And then I blew the whistle.

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