poemranker ::Wish You Were Here by mystic enoch

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Wish You Were Here

Member since 2005 · Posted 21 May 2005 · 1 comment

The funniest thing happened the other day, After I sent my child out to play. As I sat at the window I started to see beautiful images. In my mind I knew I was dreaming in that boy I saw you, it was soul redeeming. It assured me that part of you was still in the world with me. Those images started racing back at me. At that time it was you all I could see. It made me think everything was ok. My love for you will always be there. At that window I just stared into empty space. Wish you were here.

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[7] Ranger 7-Mar-06/2:57 PM Reply
I actually quite like this...not original, but sweet nonetheless. As Mr. M. Stipe once said, sweetness follows.

PS - Bollocks to Internet Exploder for repeatedly screwing up as I'm posting comments...