poemranker ::Kerri & Terri by jessicazee

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Free verse № 125289

Kerri & Terri

Member since 2002 · Posted 24 May 2005 · 3 comments

Next door neighbors all my life, you were big kids on baby swings, my fences latched, unlocked, I was sandboxed, still curtains, you were babysitters, paperboys, smoking Camels, unfiltered, your dad building tractors all morning, at night chugging Old Style, washing his hands with Lava or Goop, soaps strong enough to cloak creases of dirt, skim layers of skin before dinner, a hamburger pie, a casserole of meat, potatoes, green beans – Ritz crackers on top.

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[8] Dan garcia-Black 24-May-05/8:50 AM Reply
Ah...nostalgia! Pass the catsup and don't forget to bring in the wash off the line after dinner.
[n/a] deleted user 24-May-05/9:26 AM Reply
The nostalgia greys out under all this summing up.
[8] Dovina 24-May-05/10:55 AM Reply
"skim layers of skin" - that lava soap did that. Didn't know you lived next door.