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As the Flowers Bloom

Member since 2003 · Posted 24 May 2005 · Edited 7 Jun 2005 · 3 comments

Bee my nectar, You drank from my womb. Bee my heart, Pierced by your sting. Bee my eyes, Reflections of your you. Bee my love, Be your death. Bee my beginning, Be your end. Bee my painful cry, Be your last words. Be forever mine, Bee just be mine.

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[7] deleted user 24-May-05/1:13 PM Reply
A *9* for daring to be original
[7] deleted user › deleted user 7-Jun-05/4:16 PM Reply
That was then. I've matured since. Still good for a *7*
[5] Dovina 7-Jun-05/5:30 PM Reply
Are you a drone in love with a female worker. They have no interest in the likes of you as they bring home the nectar while you loaf about the hive.