honey bee

Member since 2003 · Posted 25 May 2005 · 3 comments

mellifluent voice hums and speaks of labor shared between workers yielding sweet nectar buzzing constantly the drone shows favor for they dance nightly with a prosthetic stinger please savor the taste since i've been replaced

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[5] deleted user 26-May-05/4:42 AM Reply

'Mellifluent' sets off the rhythm of the poem, but right after that rhythm isn't maintained...
I can't place the 'replaced' bit.

[n/a] istillthinkofu 26-Feb-06/6:43 PM Reply

B,
You could never be replaced...
I still think of you, ya know?
How are you?

[n/a] deleted user › istillthinkofu 14-May-06/10:47 AM Reply

Stalker much?