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Kiteflying

Member since 2002 · Posted 26 May 2005 · 2 comments

Don't fly a kite near a pylon, especially if you're wearing nylon. You may be a nylon fanatic, but you certainly won't remain static. Don't give in to those urges, as the resulting power surges, will make your head feel rotten. Wise up and stick to cotton!

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[4] deleted user 26-May-05/4:44 AM Reply
This reads like a commercial rhyme from the 1950's...
[1] D P Robertson 13-Oct-05/8:34 PM Reply
For an eight year old's first effort, all I can say it was very brave- awful but brave none the less- do you have any other interests to fill your day?

David