Fireflies

by mikejedw

Member since 2002 · Posted 10 May 2002 · 3 comments

Fireflies at night from time immemorial gettin' their freak on

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[4] anonymous 19-May-02/12:40 AM Reply

Ha!! again, the haiku successfully integrated into now and here
thanks

it really re echoes; really does; worth internalising

[10] hoopoe 19-May-02/3:06 AM Reply

I love this
and you are USING the cliche "time immemorial" to signify itself, adn you evoke (intentionally?" soem Tennyson thing about bees - wotsit?? the murmur of innumerable bees"?? and there's "immemorial elms" somewhere too.
GREAT juxtapositon; get the joy of it, and the love of them

[2] Robert K Foster 14-Aug-02/9:38 AM Reply

dull yet contemporary