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Rise (incomplete)

Member since 2005 · Posted 20 Jun 2005 · Edited 22 Jun 2005 · 3 comments

Here I am against my insecurities i stumble and i struggle to come back and when i try to realize whats gone is gone its no suprise that everything i lost is what id had alone i stand alone i fall against this rising current I will sing my anthem at the top of my lungs and maybe if you heed my call you'll live your life and take it all I never meant to hold you back angel

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3 comments

[n/a] Bankrupt_Word_Clerk 20-Jun-05/10:57 PM Reply
and maybe the Texas sun can call you west, and the moon from Houston can call you home.
[3] darby pyn 21-Jun-05/9:35 AM Reply
it's lacking something. maybe more detail?
[3] Dovina 21-Jun-05/9:56 AM Reply
I'm not sure you know exactly what you want to say.