poemranker ::it's okay to cry, idiot by calliope

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it's okay to cry, idiot

by calliope

Member since 2003 · Posted 1 Jul 2005 · 2 comments

Even branches cry once in awhile, so let your tears fall down. without the branches weeping we'd have nothing strewn about to rake into piles and jump into when autumn comes around. so let your fears be quelled, them tears will surely soothe you now.

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[5] Dovina 1-Jul-05/4:08 PM Reply
"idiot" in the title detracts. Line 2 could be left out without loss.
[8] Caducus 3-Jul-05/1:15 AM Reply
Line one is awesome.