poemranker ::Mr.Lucky: A Night on The Town by Bethy

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Mr.Lucky: A Night on The Town

Member since 2005 · Posted 6 Aug 2005 · 4 comments

I got on my high heeled sneakers and cheap leather pants I got a clean shaven face and $52 and 64 cents I got a swing in my walk and a song in my mouth I got chicklets in my pockets and I ani,t got no doubts I got women on my mind they don,t have to be cute I got on clean underware and a polished gold tooth I got on my best after-shave and its called Old Spice It matches my deoderant and I,m smellin real nice I got beer in my pick-up and there,s dorito,s in the dash all I need now is a little more cash I got really good manners I hope the girls don,t smuck me I,m ready for lovin Here comes Mr.Lucky

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[10] T. Jonathron Remp 8-Aug-05/8:16 AM Reply
Ha, funny character. Eeek, doritos and old spice
[n/a] Bethy › T. Jonathron Remp 9-Aug-05/12:06 PM Reply
thank you Jon...:) :) Bethy
[9] RGSsparky 8-Aug-05/12:33 PM Reply
quite amusing. Nicely put
[n/a] Bethy › RGSsparky 9-Aug-05/12:07 PM Reply
Thank you Sparky...:) :) Bethy