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Free verse № 129602

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Member since 2004 · Posted 15 Aug 2005 · 3 comments

When you don't know where to turn And you have to make a choice It's then you need to learn To listen to that still small voice He lives within your heart Just waiting for you to hear Him Don't you think it's time we start To take the time to listn

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[7] Bethy 15-Aug-05/12:55 PM Reply
good job Nicole...:) Bethy
[4] Sasha 15-Aug-05/1:17 PM Reply
Dull
[4] Dovina 15-Aug-05/3:06 PM Reply
Pretty good rhythm. Fix the spelling! But mostly try to say it in a less trite way.