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A hungry wife

Member since 2002 · Posted 3 Sep 2002 · 4 comments

I have a hungry wife in the mountains she sleeps She sheds her neon light in betrayal And when the sun sets makes promises she can not keep. Live on,endure, I try.

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[0] poetandknowit 3-Sep-02/10:05 AM Reply

"Neon light in betrayal." Missed it with that one and makes the poem...well...rubbish. and why not put this under god or alex? Or is ben your outlet for crap?

[n/a] ben 3-Sep-02/10:06 AM Reply

mainly yes-what's yours

[0] poetandknowit 3-Sep-02/10:17 AM Reply

I am not afraid of letting it all hang out under one sign. Keep it simple. Plus, all my work is genius (i.e. poetandknowit), so no reason to hide crap someplace else. There is none. I don't see how you multifaceted folks keep it all together. Too many user manes, to many passwords.

[1] deleted user 7-Sep-02/1:27 PM Reply

This is a load of crap-1/10