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Free verse № 129693

Looking for someone

by INTRANSIT

Member since 2002 · Posted 17 Aug 2005 · Edited 18 Aug 2005 · 8 comments

I want to share my Buffalo nickels and toothpaste build underground billboards with you Pull the cord when you get hit by rain Be the golden catfish on my arm! We'll take back things we haven't bought and look for all our lost pens. If you promise not to steal the white van we can practice medicine cure snakebite. Just sign my back. I'm ready again for Intercontinental beer and buffalo wings.

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[7] Dovina 18-Aug-05/10:24 AM Reply
How about simply, "A Letter To Anyone"? Or is it to someone? Must be to someone, because there must be some ones you would not want as golden catfish on you arms. I like looking for all our lost pens.
[n/a] INTRANSIT › Dovina 18-Aug-05/11:28 AM Reply
yah. I really wanted this to have more but it came on strong and then petered out on me I hate it when that happens.
[9] Bethy 18-Aug-05/3:50 PM Reply
sounds like me when I think in my car...with no pen...and a poem in my thoughts...lol :) Bethy
[n/a] ALChemy 19-Aug-05/6:49 AM Reply
Somewhere in a trailer along the backroads of West Virginia a woman eagerly awaits to hear these very words.
[7] Dovina › ALChemy 19-Aug-05/12:17 PM Reply
He needs better directions. Perhaps the name of the hollar.
[n/a] INTRANSIT › Dovina 19-Aug-05/3:28 PM Reply
For the first time in a long time here at p/r, I'm hurt.
Serves me right for writing poetry. . . . .full stop
[7] Dovina › INTRANSIT 19-Aug-05/3:59 PM Reply
No, please don't stop. I'm sure you can find her. I'm only worried about those tight turns in the ruts of West Virginia and that some of your eighteen wheels could get stuck.
[n/a] INTRANSIT › Dovina 19-Aug-05/6:13 PM Reply
See "Amputee" it's basically this poems predecessor.