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tanka(4) (Free verse) by shadows
crumbling brick wall graffitied with odd colors it's been there forever a stone chips away some paint moon shines, wind blows quietly

Up the ladder: Still Air Sticks
Down the ladder: The recovery room

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7691
Posted: August 20, 2005 9:05 AM PDT; Last modified: August 20, 2005 9:05 AM PDT
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[n/a] ALChemy @ 65.188.89.69 | 20-Aug-05/10:07 AM | Reply
Your welca(1)
[8] impert&ent @ 80.195.201.212 | 20-Aug-05/12:15 PM | Reply
I see some lines I like.
Some lines I'd like to play with too.

[9] Sasha @ 68.49.8.49 | 21-Aug-05/3:53 PM | Reply
very contemporary with the flavor of the japanese masters. nice
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