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tanka(4) (Free verse) by shadows crumbling brick wall
graffitied with odd colors
it's been there forever
a stone chips away some paint
moon shines, wind blows quietly
Up the ladder:
Below Tide
Down the ladder:
Turncoat
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Posted: August 20, 2005 9:05 AM PDT; Last modified: August 20, 2005 9:05 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.0 Overall Rank: 7690 The following users have marked this poem on their favorites list:
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ALChemy @ 65.188.89.69
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20-Aug-05/10:07 AM
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Your welca(1)
I see some lines I like.
Some lines I'd like to play with too.
very contemporary with the flavor of the japanese masters. nice
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