poemranker ::Adrian isn't just a girl from 'Rocky' by D. $ Fontera

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Adrian isn't just a girl from 'Rocky'

Member since 2004 · Posted 13 Sep 2005 · Edited 28 Apr 2006 · 1 comment

She was tall and sweet And her teeth clicked when she laughed And she died in June

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[7] deleted user 1-May-06/2:34 AM Reply
If you replaced the "ands" in lines two and three with something more concrete this would be better. A good effort though.