Free verse № 131359
Are you my love?
Are you my love?
Is it wonderful to know?
All the dreams
All the dreams
Could end in my selfishness
But my mind is happy
Need to learn to let it go
I know you meant a world to me
But since you have been changed
Iâve been lost inside
Tried and failed as my tears fell down
And I wish you could see the love in my eyes
The best memories we had
Burying me in thousand times of agony
Frozen alive in the coldness of a frozen heart
But whatâ else could I say?
Since everything has gone wrong
Seems there is no one there
Unspeakably disillusioned within despairs
Shall I rise like sea again?
Shall I be range against dying light?
Finally did we loss ourselves?
The love that death has no dominion
The love never been lost
But it just divides us
And itâs wearing me down
And itâs keeping me captivated
And itâs keeping me fascinated
Now to find it out
Where I see
You are still the love couldnât perish
Let me sink in the ocean of divination and devotion
Where are you when I die to see you?
Your are my dream
Your are my love
This poem is dedicated to the beloved
{bohemian_empress}
3 comments
"Where I see you are still the love couldnât perish
Let me sink in the ocean of divination and devotion"
The first line sounds like Yoda after sniffing deep thoughts from a paint tin and the second is just shit. However, there are some gems sprinkled throughout this and what you need to do is focus and edit. other than that
"it just divides us and itâs wearing me down"
David
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