poemranker ::What do u think i am! by T. Jonathron Remp

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Free verse № 131460

What do u think i am!

Member since 2004 · Posted 29 Sep 2005 · 3 comments

What do u think i am! i was born on an empty island a deceitful pathway to empty noise silent fingers running through my soul do u think u know me like a volcano flows rapidly like when pteredactils roamed the intense loudness awakenes my black-laced fists raining onto whoever stands in my way the feelings of joy encampuslate my lost energy starlit moons are my own heaven the night is who i seek the geeks shall enherent the earth the birthright of the seven killjoys extends into the chinese territory attack attack the rancid cat ran a muck a much needed lightning struck and exploded the night into a huge party of fire light desire, an ocean of angel lyres play singular tunes to me as i lay bare, naked in the silent moonlit sun teething, literally reething and searching for the top of the highest pain-filled mountain alas, i found gory glory in the hands of the devilish zanzibar story: NEVER MORE

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[10] zodiac 1-Oct-05/7:05 AM Reply
The best part was "encampuslate". Have you ever read anything, ever?
[6] Dovina 2-Oct-05/12:05 PM Reply
The best part is "a deceitful pathway to empty noise." Zodiac is attracted to you in a spelling or spell-binding way.
[8] Bethy 3-Oct-05/12:32 PM Reply
excellent Jon