poemranker ::hide and seek by oneglove

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Free verse № 131652

hide and seek

Member since 2004 · Posted 4 Oct 2005 · 1 comment

I count to ten Looking isn’t needed I know where to find you At the heart we carved I look towards the sun Under orange leaves I can see you there Resting softly on the highest branch I’ve grown an inch since last time Another might be enough

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[8] wilco 4-Oct-05/8:35 PM Reply
not bad.