poemranker ::Overwhelming Vulnerability by lil_miss_kittie

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Overwhelming Vulnerability

Member since 2005 · Posted 6 Oct 2005 · 0 comments

Soft silky, delicious open, Whispers desire, Secret thread, Your soul will be found uncaring. Tender, hoping loving, stroking, Wicked gasps, Untold thoughts, Your heart will be found unweaving. Faster plunging, heartbeat racing, Deeper yearnings, Almost there, Your mind will be found unyielding.

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