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dictates of whose travel agency?

by A. Nomaly

Member since 2002 · Posted 7 Oct 2005 · Edited 9 Nov 2010 · 7 comments

but these certain ones are like you, I see them once a year so of course I will pay to go not going to every little event it's so not fair I have to keep visiting you

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[8] zodiac 8-Oct-05/3:47 AM Reply
No apostrophes in the title. Anywhere. Correct would be "dictates of whose travel agency". Want to call me anal? Go ahead. At least I'm not illiterate, and anal people still get laid, apparently.
[n/a] ALChemy › zodiac 9-Oct-05/8:33 AM Reply
"and anal people still get laid, apparently."
You really left yourself wide open on that one my friend.
[8] zodiac › ALChemy 10-Oct-05/4:31 AM Reply
Heh, heh. Wide open.
[8] zodiac › zodiac 13-Oct-05/2:24 AM Reply
I noticed you still didn't drop the apostrophe from dictates.
[5] Dovina 12-Oct-05/5:34 PM Reply
Travel agencies don't dictate; they sell. Doesn't matter, I don't see what you're talking about anyway.
[n/a] A. Nomaly 9-Nov-10/3:01 AM Reply
fixed, five years later, hey I'm lil slow
[8] nypoet22 12-Feb-11/11:39 PM Reply
i wonder how many people miss the point of this. conversational tone, stripped to the bone. in its own way, this works.