poemranker ::Keep on Going by april fool

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Free verse № 131805

Keep on Going

Member since 2002 · Posted 9 Oct 2005 · 2 comments

We cannot control the wind. We can only control our sails. So patch up your yacht and try again. (Get a speedboat if all else fails!)

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[4] Dovina 9-Oct-05/6:38 PM Reply
The conclusion does not follow from the premise.
[4] wilco 11-Oct-05/8:29 PM Reply
ok, will do. So, now take this advice and write yourself another poem.