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solving the world's problems through poetry

Member since 2001 · Posted 3 Nov 2005 · 3 comments

that callow young man contoured to the corner of the shop, and blew his bargain bin darts through the star charts, laden with shallow brain farts. reads his notes from the back of a pen, so, "bic," he says "and i was made in india."

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[8] zodiac 3-Nov-05/3:27 AM Reply
The first two lines are good. The last three too.
[n/a] skaskowski › zodiac 3-Nov-05/10:21 AM Reply
thank ya
[9] Dovina 3-Nov-05/12:57 PM Reply
Funny, and true to the title.