Free verse № 133064
The Other
I was your bed tortoise
from every dreaded kiss.
I only felt your warmth,
when inside you
born from Smirnoff.
My flesh was like a ferry
roll on roll off.
You would say you loved me
crowning me a King
of pedestals and guilt.
You were not her
I was not me
I was never there
The other woman was.
When it was all over
your exit was impressive.
The landing light vigil
and mantelpiece memories
facing away from sight,
like the way I slept.
Eight months have passed.
Your hair is short now
you even wear low skirts.
I feel closer to you at arms length
for I am not yours
you were never mine
the other woman was.
Is.
7 comments
Feels like the melancholy you see in a lot of those indie films.
Bed tortoise: Great image.
You can really tell the wording was well thought out.
Actually I read it with my best nicholas cage voice
The tortise image is hard to imagine, but the rest of Verse 1 makes the scene clear.
Verse 3 seems contorted as if Line 4 should be Line 2.
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