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Forgive Me

Member since 2004 · Posted 8 Nov 2005 · 3 comments

Tell me why I am here. I sit alone; Before you, I am at your mercy, I ask for your help; I am in need of your guidance. I am a child of your grace, And I have done wrong. I ask in all of what you have given me; Forgive me for what I have done.

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[9] cyan9 9-Nov-05/5:56 AM Reply
Shows the humility and neediness of a prayer for assistance with simplicity and accuracy.
[9] zodiac 9-Nov-05/7:28 AM Reply
You are here because someone told you you need to ask forgiveness for practically everything you do. Now that you have an answer, I hope you'll consider getting off your knees and going outside.
[n/a] ALChemy 9-Nov-05/8:02 AM Reply
Answer:
"Some day, and that day may never come, I will call upon you to do a service for me..."