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subjective relationship

Member since 2003 · Posted 11 Nov 2005 · 0 comments

coal through the bottles with the bottoms broken off, coca-cola caramelized and bubbling brown between the rocks. where she smashed her beverage down after a single belchless belt, and gulped a boullion-cubic rubix cubit of air into her belly. climbing through the remnants of her coal mine field where the burning bushes barf out broken tablets... partially digested with the script a bit smudged, "thou shalt not... 500 mg." that's all i can make out.

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