poemranker ::Squalid by Caducus

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Free verse № 134089

Squalid

Member since 2002 · Posted 25 Nov 2005 · Edited 22 Mar 2006 · 3 comments

Inhibitions, Suppressed by cowards water. Skirts ride half mast Grieving for the death of self respect. At ‘Chicago Rocks’ bar A place made to feel American There are Kosovan immigrants With acrylic patterned jumpers Tucked into Wranglers. There is a black man in the toilet Trying to sell ‘Pizazz’ to men who wear ‘Chanel’. I could love this place If monogamy stopped raping me, Yet a girlfiend at home waiting Was yesterdays whore gyrating? Steel bar Monkeys Change to 2am vultures Waiting for a ballad to bail them out, With the size 16 leaopardskin blouse killer Who has a great personality nobody wants. Maybe she sees a Goddess, Maybe she is? Maybe just maybe, What we seek is squalid.

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[n/a] Caducus 22-Mar-06/8:07 AM Reply
comments deleted as it was a totally different poem to the one above.

yawn

[8] Ranger 23-Mar-06/6:32 AM Reply
This is one thousand percent right. And well put, at that.
[7] matt door 23-Mar-06/9:52 PM Reply
Maybe just maybe,
what we seek is less words from rhyming vultures, who pick at the bones of poetry - in search of something they found years and sentences ago?