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Member since 2005 · Posted 25 Nov 2005 · 9 comments

unacknowledged my words hover, ever hopeful, until shamed at last by your silence they scatter crowding somber shadows in anxious disarray.

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[n/a] ALChemy 26-Nov-05/12:30 AM Reply

Good.

[n/a] elderking › ALChemy 26-Nov-05/1:52 PM Reply

Thanks!

[6] Dovina 26-Nov-05/9:08 AM Reply

It seems a complicasted way of saying she ignores you.

[n/a] ALChemy › Dovina 26-Nov-05/11:14 AM Reply

You go girl.

[6] Dovina › ALChemy 26-Nov-05/8:22 PM Reply

Okay, I'll take that little pipi trip I've been planning for the last hour.

[n/a] elderking › Dovina 26-Nov-05/1:51 PM Reply

I figured if I was wordy enough, he might "hear" what I was saying. I figured out after awhile he was pretty much "deaf".
Thanks for the comment.

[n/a] elderking › Dovina 26-Nov-05/1:53 PM Reply

True enough! Thanks.

[8] zodiac 27-Nov-05/6:07 AM Reply

The last line's good; the first 8 don't make words do anything they haven't done for six hundred years at least.

[8] BrandonW 30-Nov-05/6:33 PM Reply

8 - I likes...