amalgam

Member since 2003 · Posted 26 Dec 2005 · 1 comment

breathing cleaner you're downstairs spoken tongues poisoning the air compound fracture flashing white enamel juxtaposed to marrow stressing the facts we ate the truth choking on an apple i heave my ribs though i'm missing a piece from within despite my injury i'll go on playing the bones

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[7] zodiac 27-Dec-05/9:19 PM Reply

My best suggestion is that you start reading real poetry. Here's a good place to start: http://www.poems.com/archive.htm