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Free verse № 136051

loved once

by celticskatermatt1

Member since 2004 · Posted 30 Dec 2005 · Edited 30 Dec 2005 · 2 comments

Changing my mind once agian Slowly going, never stopping Rightfully you are to blame So mezmorizing so intense Brings shame to a man in love.

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[7] Dovina 1-Jan-06/7:42 AM Reply
"again"
leave out "once"
Very sketchy, but good.
[4] LilMsLadyPoet 3-Jan-06/8:47 PM Reply
I don't get it.....seems too disconnected.
'again'>typo.
I take it you are afraid to commit...once bitten, twice shy thing here? It could have been more clear. Why the shame?