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The Fragile silhouette of me

Member since 2002 · Posted 5 Jan 2006 · Edited 5 Jan 2006 · 3 comments

[music] I saw also that there was an ocean of darkness and death but an infinite ocean of light and love which flowed over the ocean of darkness ... ..As i said that I laid down... Down to my tears and fears now they are like an infinite ocean of agony which flows over and over again I’m just staring at light. It’s getting darker and darker finally the void is all me it doesn’t end in light and love they were words wasted away [silence] as I passed away into the void [void]

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[n/a] Prince of Void 7-Jan-06/12:43 AM Reply
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[6] zodiac › Prince of Void 7-Jan-06/3:36 AM Reply
= Void.

I suppose that's because you're the Prince of Void. You think your job is pretty much to say "void" in as many different ways as you can think of. It's as if the Princess of Wales just said "Wales, Wales, Wales, Wales, Wales," all the time.
[8] pollywolly 22-Jan-06/9:12 AM Reply
i think this is written quite beautifully. it just flows from line to line almost taking you into the void. super!