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Free verse № 136792

for one day only

Member since 2006 · Posted 11 Jan 2006 · 1 comment

the old man of the sea stares wistfully towards the shore, his grey eyes twinkling, matching the colour of the granite rock upon which he sits, wishing for one day only to be free of the storm-filled seas, and to walk proud like a man with the sand beneath his feet

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[6] daggatolar 11-Jan-06/10:02 AM Reply
those who hunger after the sea, can only dream of the land and sand... is this life?