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levity kiss

Member since 2001 · Posted 13 Jan 2006 · 4 comments

rules fall before, falling after, then after. what once was a frivolous kiss amidst the laughter. you commit-or you sin, singed with lipstick afire. one kiss marks the end. or you begin as a liar.

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[n/a] skaskowski 13-Jan-06/3:00 AM Reply

okay, so everyone knows, there was wordplay involved... levity kiss... leviticus... i wish i didnt keep having to explain myself, but go from there, okay? i wont dissect the rest.

[7] Dovina 13-Jan-06/12:49 PM Reply

I'm glad you explained that. But why not just let the first line be: Leviticus, levity kiss.

"singed with lipstick" is good.

[n/a] skaskowski › Dovina 13-Jan-06/10:05 PM Reply

thank you.

[6] ecargo 15-Jan-06/9:11 AM Reply

I get the "rules"-Leviticus intent, I guess (Leviticus is the book that deals w/ rules and ritual, right?), but the connection seems flimsy.